Well...there isn't much buuuut I can already tell...
I LOVE THIS!! SIIGHHH Why did it have to end right there lol??!! I need more Maddock; he seems to thinks he's just oso smooth. I'm looking forward to the next update.
I will say though; It's really hard to see. Left my eyes a little strained. The light font on such a dark background is a little headache inducing. Maybe a darker font like Monstarerri(lol I don't think I spelled nor said that right like AT ALL)
And not to worry, I actually changed the font to that exact one lmao! I also made the font a lot brighter in color, so it's easier to read against the dark background. I want to try and figure out how to code more themes and add more fonts, like open dyslexic and a few others, it"ll take me a bit but I'm working on it!
Also I am writing Maddock x Mc's shy route so far and ldkngakjebgfklaenbsk. His route moves pretty fast lol. I'm kind of obsessed with the RO's I'm writing.
Does your eye color affect the story? Each choice describes completely different scenes.I'm used to eye color selection being just a personal aesthetic thing to help visualize your character.
Hi there! If you read all the choices for eye color, they reveal a bit of the characters past. It's chronological and just adds flavor to the story! :)
There will actually be an interlude or chapter that focuses on what happened to our character and their brother, the choice is essentially them reliving a specific memory in the chain of events.
Oh, I'm not used to that sort of exposition being in the text of choices. I mean, I only actually read them to figure out which was actually my character's eye color.
It wont be like that for every choice, I just wanted to bring out the narrative in an interesting way.
I also realize it might be a bit vague so anyone reading this, the eye colors are as follows: brown, gray, red, black, gold, hazel, blue. When I add the next page for each of those choices, it will actually write out what eye color your character has.
also I forgot green eyes, that will be added later.
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Well...there isn't much buuuut I can already tell...
I LOVE THIS!! SIIGHHH Why did it have to end right there lol??!! I need more Maddock; he seems to thinks he's just oso smooth. I'm looking forward to the next update.
I will say though; It's really hard to see. Left my eyes a little strained. The light font on such a dark background is a little headache inducing. Maybe a darker font like Monstarerri(lol I don't think I spelled nor said that right like AT ALL)
omggg I'm so happy you're enjoying it so far!!
And not to worry, I actually changed the font to that exact one lmao! I also made the font a lot brighter in color, so it's easier to read against the dark background.
I want to try and figure out how to code more themes and add more fonts, like open dyslexic and a few others, it"ll take me a bit but I'm working on it!
Also I am writing Maddock x Mc's shy route so far and ldkngakjebgfklaenbsk. His route moves pretty fast lol. I'm kind of obsessed with the RO's I'm writing.
This font is hard to read on that background (actually better if dark mode is not pure black).I also recommend adding light mode.
Thank you for the suggestions!
I will change the font to something easier to read next update. And eventually add multiple fonts.
And I'll see about adding light mode too!
Does your eye color affect the story? Each choice describes completely different scenes.I'm used to eye color selection being just a personal aesthetic thing to help visualize your character.
Hi there! If you read all the choices for eye color, they reveal a bit of the characters past. It's chronological and just adds flavor to the story!
:)
There will actually be an interlude or chapter that focuses on what happened to our character and their brother, the choice is essentially them reliving a specific memory in the chain of events.
Oh, I'm not used to that sort of exposition being in the text of choices. I mean, I only actually read them to figure out which was actually my character's eye color.
It wont be like that for every choice, I just wanted to bring out the narrative in an interesting way.
I also realize it might be a bit vague so anyone reading this, the eye colors are as follows: brown, gray, red, black, gold, hazel, blue. When I add the next page for each of those choices, it will actually write out what eye color your character has.
also I forgot green eyes, that will be added later.