The Night That Feeds
You feel a chill down your spine, the hairs at the back of your neck prickle. You don't dare look behind you... The shadow smiles.
The Night That Feeds is a dark fantasy, interactive story. It will have heavy themes of familial abuse, sexually suggestive themes (perhaps more explicit stuff too, eventually), and other dark themes. A comprehensive content warning will be made available as the story develops.
"This is a story of love, loss, and of trying to find a home".
Remember this is a work in progress demo, things subject to change and stuff.
✧ Content ✧
- A customizable protagonist, name, gender, appearance, etc.
- Multiple romance options (barely implemented at this time).
- Substance use.
- Explicit sexual content.
- Mental health issues.
- Abusive family dynamics.
- An interesting fantasy land that you get to explore.
- MAGIC!!
- Etc.
!!BARELY IMPLEMENTED--MOST CHARACTERS NOT MET!!
・❥・ Romance Options ・❥・
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Captain E. Ward: Fame, fortune, infamy... All these and more follow Captain Ward. Their job is a demanding one, an important one, a dangerous one. They seem to be a commanding, playful person, but how deep do their scars run?
Age: 30
["Isn't it beautiful?" They say as they stare out into the void. Nebulous clouds drift behind, trailing the ship. "So Void-damned beautiful, and so fucked up." They look you in the eyes, and lick the edge of their bottom lip. "You sure you want this, with me?"]
They are a lonely person, they crave, and despise attention. They're afraid of intimacy, of love. What kind of life is a life in the Void? Who would willingly share that with them?
TW: Attempted murder (on them), clinginess.
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Maddock: A surly mercenary, he watches out for you, all due to a 'favor' of a nature you can't discern. The way he looks at you is reminiscent of a deep longing.
Age: Late 30's, early 40's
["I never thought that I'd be one t' have something like this at my age. I let my dreams go in my youth." He pats the cushion next to him. "You don't expect things t' turn out, I've been a hired sword for so long, felt like all I knew how t' do."]
He's a gruff man, doesn't got a heart of gold, but if you end up falling for each other, there isn't anything that would come between you.
TW: Possessive, sexual.
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The Hunger: It's been watching you for a long time...
Age: ???
["Oh, if it isn't my little bird, what is it? Is your wing broken? You don't seem eager to fly away this time..." It slinks closer, grinning wide. ]
An entity, not... malevolent, at least not to you. However, it holds a sick fascination for you.
TW: Yandereish. Stalker. Obsession.
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Fellis: A woman who seems to be around your age, she's an eager adventurer, she took a liking to you immediately, and seems keen to stoke the flames hotter.
Age: 20's
["Oh, lovey. There you are." She takes your hand in hers, placing a gentle kiss along your knuckle. "I've brought something for you."]
She thinks you're the most beautiful person she's seen. She may even take up poetry to describe her budding love for you.
NO TW. MEGA FLUFF ALERT.
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Xep: A strange person, wearing bright crimson robes, with gorgeous star decaling in gold. They wear copious amounts of jewelry, and enjoy the finer things. They were immediately drawn to you, they were forced to this back water of a town, they never expected anyone like you to cross their path.
Age: 27
["I want to hold you, please stay?" Their mouth creeps upwards, the wine has given them a positively radiant complexion, the heat blatant on their cheeks.]
They're a sad soul, after experiencing a heart break that left them devastated, they never expected to find love again.
SLIGHT TW: Mentions of suicide, heart break, mentions of being cheated on.
Credit to: nyehilism for the sugarcube template, you've made things easier on me as an aspiring IF writer, thank you!
Development log
- NEW DEMO NEW UPDATE36 minutes ago
- fixed gramatical mistakes etcSep 03, 2023
- Minor update, but more background!Sep 02, 2023
- I was gonna release at 20k but got too excited...Jul 30, 2023
- Demo small update: Relationships, and a lil extraJun 28, 2023
- Demo update: MOBILE WORKS!! And stuffJun 23, 2023
- Demo update: a lil sumthin extraJun 20, 2023
- 4K WORD DEMO UPDATE!!Jun 19, 2023
Comments
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omg my last comment waiting was a year HELP
Im so invested!
thank you! i’m glad you like, i’m excited to share the next update when it’s ready :)
👏👏👏👏
I really want this
Really enjoyed the start for this game. I hope development continues.
I want this so much
I've fallen deeply in love with Maddock, The Hunger and the overall story so far and I'm desperate for an update 🥺 POVs that show how the yandere/possessive characters actually feel about us always capture my heart... I know it's unlikely, but what would be the chance of a V poly with the 2 red flags? Maybe they can agree to protect the MC together
(or more likely put up with the other for the sake of the MC asdsdjak)Or is it only in my dreams? 😔Also do you have a tumblr for this IF? It might help for us to keep track of updates, plus maybe fun character asks!
boy do I have a treat for you. https://the-night-that-feeds-if.tumblr.com/ (ps the poly is most likely going to happen, from looking at the tumblr, if he has time and energy)
YESS!! tysm ( /^ 0 ^) / <3
wait really >3>!? OMG YES ... well depends Maddock and ??? for me but that might not be a match
thank you for giving them the link to my tumblr! i may not be as active but i’m still here and writing.
the wildfire poly is a definite (red is my favorite color<3)
also i appreciate you adding the caveat about having the time or energy for it, it’s an ambitious book lmao, i don’t feel like i’ve bitten off too much, but it’s definitely been a big learning process especially when dealing with life stuff and writing and online presence. i might not be around as much to engage with ya’ll as other authors for now, but i do plan on changing that in the future when i can. just know, for anyone reading this, the intro rewrite is going really well (my writing has improved so much imo) and it will take me a long time, but i’m excited to unveil it once i get there.
of course! I tried writing my own IF and.. wow? It takes up so much brain power, so all the power to you (and every other writer for that matter). I’m glad you’re not finding too much stress from it (as I’m interpreting it). I and I’m sure many others are excited to see what happens with it! Please take your time, and know that you’re appreciated whether or not you engage with the audience.
The story is so good! also the characters are greatly written! can't wait for the next update!
Absolutely love it so far. Can't wait for more!!!
You cannot give me a ??? Character especially a yandere that doesnt want to hurt mc calling us pet names and expect me to choose anyone else 🥴
Love it so far keep up the good work
AAA THIS IS SOO GOOD, I NEED MORE, UR WORK ITS AMAZINGGG
I love this work and Maddock! Looking forward to more! <3<3<3
I hope the author can rest well ^-^
thank you <3 working on getting back to my best. I appreciate all the love! And I love how much people are loving Maddock, I'm proud of his character so far and I can't wait to give each character their time to shine.
Maddock is the best <3!
OMG I love this so much and POV I love POV so much ty for them <3 and the story is so good tooo keep up the work <3
does someone has the author blog link?
i hope the author is okay :" in one of the comments they said they'll be back in november and it's january now (also i can't find their tumblr???) pls stay safe and healthy dear author <333
hey sorry about the confusion. I've been on break because I've been having health issues. But I am still working on this, it's not dead just slow right now. Life, amirite?
aahh don't ever feel bad for taking breaks, especially if it's concerning your health. prioritize your health and comfort, dear author! we love your work and we'll be patiently waiting here for your return <3 (also pls tell
daddybig mountain man Maddock i miss him ayy) <333Damn...that was an abrupt ending I did NOT prepare for.....We.Need.MOREEEEE
omg this looks promising!! so curious to see how shy MC and Maddock will play out :3 when is the next update?
I thought that the demo couldn't get any better...but the changes somehow made the impossible possible!
Ahhh that, means a lot. Thank you!
There’s going to be even more changes next update, new character creator etc. I’m so excited to unveil what I’ve been working on. :D
When is that next update??
:)
I'm taking a small break! I can't give a good estimate right now but I'm gonna say some time this month, or the start of november!
Thank you! have a nice break :)
I just wanna say that this just gave me back my will to live /pos
This is amazing, you are a talented writer and the setting is so interesting! I love this already and look forward to any future updates!
Thank you so much! I'm happy to know you like the setting so far ^^
my god this is a crime. i mean, i'm only a few pages in and already rolling on the ground kicking my feet giggling blushing
begging on my kneesbecause of Maddock???SPOILER
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"Safira never said he would give me heart attacks..."
that's right dear author, where's the TW huh? maybe 'big dom mountain
daddyman might make you combust from overheating' or something like that lol jk. probably. lmaoon a serious note, this is AMAZING. the writing, the characters (okay, i haven't finished this but come on, from the descriptions alone i just know this if is a three course meal i'd gratefully devour)
lord knows i've been waiting for a character like Maddock, like, desperately waiting. my little sub-maso heart is thankful and she's happily twirling inside my chest rn (was that a TMI? oh well lmao)
may you get to have your favorite food everytime you crave it and i wish you a good good night sleep, beloved author <3
LOL! Thank you, I am so incredibly flattered. I love your energy!!
I'm very happy you're enjoying our resident mountain man ;) He's a fun character to write.
oh? a compliment on my energy sounds like a marriage proposal to me so if you would be so kindly to pls sign here- lmao jkjk pls tell Maddock to sign instead-
but THANK YOU omg that's like one of the best kind of compliments and something i'd remember for sure when I need a lift up on bad days aahhh that just made my week! i hope you have the nicest and stress-free week and your favorite beverage is always the right temperature whenever you're having it <3
How dare this be this good and how bloody dare i only find it now! 🙄
Lmao, I'm happy you enjoy it so far :)
I met the first two RO and I am already torn! Love love love the demo!
It has been intriguing wholesome at the same time <3
It's a hard choice! Thank you so much, I'm happy you liked it <33
Maddock is going to make me blush ngl-
and I'm pretty looking forward to see more of The Hunger as well
Writing Maddock is an experience. Sometimes I'm just like... Woof.
I'm glad you're enjoying so far ^^
What can I say? It has a fascinating premise and an incredible beginning 🤍
I always select Shy Mc replies in almost all IFs I play but this time it's different because Maddock paired up with Shy MC, I just don't know how to describe it...ughh it's such a dangerous yet lovely combination. Now I see why everyone likes the interplay between shy Mc and Maddock 🌝 🫡..
~Can't wait to spend more time with him🥹 ..
...Lenna...I bloody hate you ‼️
I can't wait to get to know the other ROs and find out more about MC's backstory :)
I'm glad I found this IF and dear author tysm for creating it ✨
I am so happy that you're enjoying the story so far, and I'm also very glad that you're enjoying the interactions with the character(s) and how it changes based on your mc's disposition.
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! :D
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do you have a tumblr i can follow ??
Hi! I do have a tumblr, it's @vaylevym, or the link is on my profile here :)
For some reasons the tumblr link on your profile doesn't work.
that's odd, I'll see if I can fix it, thanks for letting me know!
Edit: It should be working now
Yes it does, thank you :)
i am actually like maddock and shy mc dynamic but the hunger is intrigue and you writting great so far i pretty sure i hate mc mother
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far and the interactions with the characters! :)
thank you so much for the support.
Great demo, looking forward to more.
Thank you so much!
I'm hoping to shift to larger updates that take more time, so I'm going for the end of august/start of september for the next update
Damn that was a good demo I wanted to see more but I loved it keep up the good work and stories ^^
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the demo so far :)
i loved it i cant wait to read more stories ^^
I can't continue from here is there something i'm missing? what am i suppose to click to continue? Plz answer i would love to continue reading.
Hi there! That is currently the end of the demo, I just forgot to mark it, next time there will be a specific ending page so that it's not just a harsh cutoff like that.
I'm very glad you're enjoying it so far though! I'm hoping to get another update done this month.
Oh thanks for telling me i almost thought it was a bugs!
I love what I had read so far. Where it had ended from the last update is making me wonder what will happen when the next update comes.
I'm so glad you liked it!
im loving this so far!!🥰 (Maddock × shy MC I- Wha- 😳😳😳 *gulp*)
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!
I'm hoping to get a big update in before August, I'm planning a lot of fun Maddock and co stuff >:3
omg I'm looking forward to the next update!! <33 Have a wonderful day!🫶
i just can't make the side menu back off so that i can actually read
I'm so sorry that the UI is getting in your way!
I will work on making a way for the side menu to be put away, I'll try to get that done this week. Thank you for letting me know about this issue.
Hi, I wanted to ask, are you playing the game on mobile or PC?Because I've had no issue with the UI bar on PC, and my game isn't optimized for mobile.
Thank you ^_^
Oh, i didn't know. I was using mobile to play.
I'm trying to figure out how to make everything read well for mobile, that'll probably take me a while though!
it works on mobile now!! I used a new UI template
Thanks, it works and the ui is much better to read to, and truly Maddock made the wait worth it <3
Woo! I'm happy everything is good now.
Just wait till you see the downtime I have planned for Maddock and the MC 🤭
I sure do love a horror/not so fluff romance :) Love this so far!
I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far!
Hopefully I'll have a big update soonish ^_^
Well...there isn't much buuuut I can already tell...
I LOVE THIS!! SIIGHHH Why did it have to end right there lol??!! I need more Maddock; he seems to thinks he's just oso smooth. I'm looking forward to the next update.
I will say though; It's really hard to see. Left my eyes a little strained. The light font on such a dark background is a little headache inducing. Maybe a darker font like Monstarerri(lol I don't think I spelled nor said that right like AT ALL)
omggg I'm so happy you're enjoying it so far!!
And not to worry, I actually changed the font to that exact one lmao! I also made the font a lot brighter in color, so it's easier to read against the dark background.
I want to try and figure out how to code more themes and add more fonts, like open dyslexic and a few others, it"ll take me a bit but I'm working on it!
Also I am writing Maddock x Mc's shy route so far and ldkngakjebgfklaenbsk. His route moves pretty fast lol. I'm kind of obsessed with the RO's I'm writing.
This font is hard to read on that background (actually better if dark mode is not pure black).I also recommend adding light mode.
Thank you for the suggestions!
I will change the font to something easier to read next update. And eventually add multiple fonts.
And I'll see about adding light mode too!
Does your eye color affect the story? Each choice describes completely different scenes.I'm used to eye color selection being just a personal aesthetic thing to help visualize your character.
Hi there! If you read all the choices for eye color, they reveal a bit of the characters past. It's chronological and just adds flavor to the story!
:)
There will actually be an interlude or chapter that focuses on what happened to our character and their brother, the choice is essentially them reliving a specific memory in the chain of events.
Oh, I'm not used to that sort of exposition being in the text of choices. I mean, I only actually read them to figure out which was actually my character's eye color.
It wont be like that for every choice, I just wanted to bring out the narrative in an interesting way.
I also realize it might be a bit vague so anyone reading this, the eye colors are as follows: brown, gray, red, black, gold, hazel, blue. When I add the next page for each of those choices, it will actually write out what eye color your character has.
also I forgot green eyes, that will be added later.